California Exam Volume II Treatment Planning and Treatment Unit 11 Same as 9 Basically help
Hi June – I am really amazed at the challenges you have faced while starting this program. I hope you are ok!
I thought your content of this paper more than completed the assignment expectations. You have clearly identified a major “theme’ of the paper and brought in ideas from your readings to support these thoughts. Your organization is clear and your ideas are well-stated.
Literally the only thing that I noticed that is really subtle is related to your in-text citations. If you have an entire paragraph from one source, you would put the in-text citation after the first sentence of the paragraph. Often times also, ideas that are not common knowledge will be cited with an in-text citation (even if you personally know it – you have to prove that the idea is legitimate). So, you will see a couple of places where I put “(CITE)†– I would just insert a reference here (likely one of the two that you have here.
Please let me know if you have any questions! This is very well-done – especially given your circumstances.
~Valerie Glass 6/21/16
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Thank you Brenda.