as-a-college-president-what-changes-that-would-you-make-English-homework-help

Topic: If you were a college president what changes that would you make

notes:

I want the thesis statement in the last line of the first paragraph and please mention the three changes in thesis statement ( interdiction )

I want the the changes mentioned in the first line in each paragraph for example the first and most change that I would make is that ……

in the conclusion please rewrite the thesis statement and summarize each paragraph and the last sentence will be the suggestion or recommendation

* I don’t want it sound very advance, I want simple with simple words as a second language speaker

thank you very much